I just wrote a poem, I would like to see what you think of it and where I can submit for a contest? - push back tugs
Court Jester
The king rejoices, dinner is served, the meat tender and sweet and sour wine.
I am the court jester, the program for fun, dance and caper until the room reeling with laughter.
More King asked if I dance faster and faster, another sound of explosions of laughter in the room.
Laughter fuels me, keeps me, and according to his will, I'm just a puppet in the crowd.
I gave them my strings a long time ago, I can not turn away, but up to dance.
I wonder if I could separate my lines, but it would be easy? Could easily with a small pair of scissors snipe?
I see, I turned and left, tugs on my king thread, but I've movedburn.
I think they complement each other, and freedom, opened the door, I'm sorry, but this dinner show is over.
Please tell me what you think and if you could tell me places that pay for and may be published.
Friday, February 19, 2010
Push Back Tugs I Just Wrote A Poem, I Would Like To See What You Think Of It And Where I Can Submit For A Contest?
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I'm not a fan of poetry, but I understand that, and what makes a good poem. You need a lot of symbolism, many unnecessary words that make no sense, and never talk directly to anything. You do that, what you have written is going, how to, not much rhetoric and not symbolic, and probably much more than a bad attempt, sealing could be considered. No offense, as I said, I'm not a fan of poetry. If you wish, by "going the rules of poetry," though certainly need to be rewritten.
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